Today TV channels provide man s sport show more than women s sport show Why Should TV channel give equal time for women s sport and men s sport

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Today, TV channels provide man's sport show more than women's sport show. Why? Should TV channel give equal time for women's sport and men's sport?

Nowadays, tv channels tend to spend more time providing man’s sport show rather than women’s sport show. I believe they have their own reasons to do so, however, TV channel should give more episodes for women’s sport show to enhance women’s health.

It is clear that TV channels almost give time for man’s sport show because of two main reasons. Firstly, women are not interested in watching sport shows than men, they only care for fashion or beauty shows. Many ladies stick their eyes into the TVs’ screen, because they would like to seek for one of the most fashionable styles. Secondly, the aim of TV channels for commercial reasons, they are able to do business when they advertise the modern sport products for men. For example, young teenagers will idolize the famous football players such as David Beckham or Ronaldo, so they try to look for sneakers, cap or sport clothing, which are similar to their idols.

However, TV shows should produce more sport programs for women to encourage them to practice sports. On the one hand, women have great opportunities to figure out the beauty of sports, because they will help them release stress when they watch sport coverages. On the other hand, these shows are able to open new horizons for women in term of enhancing women’s health. That is a motivation to be keen on practicing sports like learning to do yoga under instructions of the coach on TV.

Although TV channels arrange unequal time between men’s sport and women’s sport, they should provide more shows for women because of balancing healthy lives for each woman.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95185185185 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33357141642 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1554997748 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.612796345556 0.244688304435 250% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.289820907897 0.084324248473 344% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189042971097 0.0667982634062 283% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.482601344908 0.151304729494 319% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135307651433 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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