1. Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars or other items. What are the reasons for this trend? And is this the negative or positive development?
It is a fact that numerous people are likely to purchase reputable brands including vehicles or expensive clothes these days. There are several reasons of this trend, however, I believe that its advantages far outweigh its disadvantages.
Some related causes can be anticipated when people tend to consume well-known names. The first reason is that many youngsters would like to prove their social positions, so they make great efforts to buy prevalent brands. Take the women tendency of shopping as an example, they buy leather bags to witness their wealth in the society. The second reason is that due to the widespread social media, a vast majority of users post their photos with their luxurious items such as cars and limited shoes or dresses on Facebook. They try to show off how rich they are on the virtual network sites.
Furthermore, I am convinced that buying expensive commodities brings positive impacts on human’s life. It is undeniable that high quality products and reliability are found in luxurious goods, consequently, this provides a sense of satisfaction for the customers. One typical example of this point is that Iphone of Apple corporation is one of the most famous brands all over the world, which has variety of functions with higher technology such as Icloud. Additionally, if people would like to meet their demands, they will work harder to gain what they wish. Thus, the needs of buyers probably make a huge contribution to the development of social economy.
In conclusion, despite having several causes of buying well-known names, I personally believe that the positive influences of this trend play a crucial role in the advancement of society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15272727273 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75756749916 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4977341871 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26027735753 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071541323991 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392118836309 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144831987514 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033681494431 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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