Television sporting shows such as Olympics to motivate the youth who do not like to exercise much. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, telecasting sports such as Olympics have increasingly become popular among the young, which encourages them to do more physical activities. Personally, I completely agree that these sport channels play the most crucial role in changing young people’s thought.
There are three major rationales why youngsters should watch sporting shows on a daily basis. The first reason for this trend is that it kindles the enthusiasm to keep fit by playing sports. In particular, when subscribing sports events they are able to develop a great opportunity to initiate the skills of their sport stars. It means that these young participants are able to practice doing sports according to taking video lessons without commuting the sport centers. Furthermore, multifarious sport coverages inspire the youngsters to change their sedentary lifestyles. For example, many adolescents are likely to addict to online games after classes, and these kind of programs immerse participants into the live action in lieu of playing computer games. Secondly, professional sports are attributed to the youth who ambitiously strive for their occupation because these jobs may bring them about both fame and fortune. In Viet Nam, for instance, a large number of teenagers sign up for the football course in order to adopt special training sessions, which can help them promote further skill developments and physical condition. Last but not least, when gathering together in front of the sports in the media that is an occasion for the society to motive themselves because they may share their common interest with others.
In conclusion, I am convinced that sports news or events on television are one of the most motivated factor to inspire young people relation to taking more regular exercise in the community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...and fortune. In Viet Nam, for instance, a large number of teenagers sign up for the football cour...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35438596491 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74529508825 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663157894737 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9089928194 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210561246308 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683898306845 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479613964748 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139055641698 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188974679292 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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