Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or not?
It is undeniable that rules and laws implemented by the government play a fundamental role in any society. Therefore, people believe that it is necessary to restrict human beings from complete freedom in order to maintain the social order. My view is that I totally concur with this notion.
Firstly, residents would live under threat of criminals if being free to do as a person please was not under control. In fact, laws and rules have been imposed on delinquents and illegal activities, which have served as not only detention to bad behaviors but also a deterrent to promote the true moral values. In other words, it helps people clarify wrong and right so that they can avoid committing crime. For instance, people who embrace misleading beliefs and eventually turn into offenders like robbers of murderers cause damages to the victims and lead to an uncontrolable society. Thanks to the justice system, the awareness of good manners rises as well as the high rate of criminals is regulated.
Secondly, the lack of compulsory policy will negatively affect the basic needs of inhabitants, which results in a decline in life quality. In terms of finance, merchants would take advantage of products that are in overwhelming demand to gain their profits. This issue brings about impairment in other aspects of life like mental and physical health. Take the medical devices during the first stage of Covid 19 for example, masks and sterilizers were exploited to fulfill personal interest and became too expensive to afford. Since the authorities had not punctually established rules on this matter, the phenomenon kept arousing anxiety in the society where its residents were suffering from both economic crisis and disease.
In conclusion, I fully agree with the idea that people should not be given unlimited choices of their life including misdeeds, which means countries must execute opportune regulation and guidelines to guarantee that function.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20886075949 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70183490856 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674050632911 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2613230143 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110064063732 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275750683458 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342184708468 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526393938119 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202619245066 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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