Online shopping is becoming more popular. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of work required?
It is a fact that people increasingly tend to go shopping online rather than going to the shopping centers. Although this trend could be convenient for consumers, it arises some negative impacts on environment. In addition, various jobs will be replaced by new careers, which need more skillful levels.
To begin with purchasing products through internet or cellphone is a significant pressure on adverse environment. Firstly, many people make transactions at the shopping malls, which may lead to noise pollution. Additionally, air pollution is one of the most serious problems, because almost buyers travel from a far distance to the supermarkets or dynamic shopping centers to choose what they need. Second, a large number of plastic bags are remarkably released into the landfills on a daily basis, which is extremely harmful to the human habitats.
Apart from environmental damage, unemployment in particular jobs is one of issues which should be concerned, and different jobs will rise based on the social development. On the one hand, most retail stores will replace their major labour force such as salesperson, shop keeper or consultants by more skillful staff. For instance, these people have to learn new knowledge to adapt to new environment and later they will become website planners or graphic designers. On the other hand, there will be increasing the demand technical and creative professionals who are able to run the web system smoothly
In conclusion, while going shopping via online applications is more common, however, this trend could be a major cause of harmful environment in term of human residence and pollution, as well as different jobs will emerge based on the rapidly social change.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nters to choose what they need. Second, a large number of plastic bags are remarkably released in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29927007299 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88914662191 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631386861314 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.0027211804 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.4545454545 7.06120827912 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162020123687 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557187576089 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500577417829 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113132761528 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692114215139 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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