Online shopping is becoming more popular How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of work required

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Online shopping is becoming more popular. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of work required?

With the aid of technological advances at the speed of light, online shopping has become a prevalent way of shopping for various products and services. This trend has profound implications on the environment and the types of employment.
To begin with, it should be never denied that the rise of e-shopping retailers is both beneficial and harmful to the environment to some extent. One obvious merit of this trend, perhaps, is Slowed Climate Change. This can be explained by the fact that since consumers do not need to drive to brick-and-mortar stores, This will eventually lessen a great feal of exhaust fumes which is one of the causes of the climate crisis. However, The picture does not look rosy. If people are more encouraged to shopping online, more plastic wastes will be released into oceans and rivers due to overpackaging. The natural habitat of many marine species will be destroyed as a result.
In addition, the growth of E-shopping has also brought negative as positive impacts on people's employment. On the one hand, this development will create job opportunities for people especially those who major in Information Technology. In fact, to maintain an E-store, shoppers need to hire many kinds of job vacancies such as data administrators, web designers, delivery drivers, etc. On the other hand, due to the online shopping growth, traditional stores which create thousands of job retailers will reduce. Consequently, it will put a strain on the government to create alternative jobs for these individuals which might take a long haul and a large amount of budget.
In conclusion, Online shopping impacts the environment and work market in both positive and negative ways.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...vironment and the types of employment. To begin with, it should be never denied...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14130434783 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96296851479 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7394216534 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.357142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212780093266 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716437592664 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059577073458 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149909197611 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588715187383 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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