An America film actor John Wayne said:”Tomorrow is the most important thing in life”. How is it important for individuals and countries to think about the future rather than focus on the present.
There is a debate over an importance of the future to life rather than the current. I would disagree this point of view since both of them are the most essential criteria for human being, especially individuals and the government. In this essay, I will outline some reasons to justify the significance between these two terms.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that the future is one of our top priorities which is immensely potential for giving people opportunities to enhance their living conditions. First and foremost, the future is the driving force to lift our spirit up whenever we experience setbacks or face with some difficulties at present. Indeed, most of people always put a huge effort in their daily work to achieve their aims in life. That being said, it is rarely to succeed at the very first attempt, thus people can easily prone to disappointment or even worse, they tend to give up. Unless thinking about the future, people would be pessimistic and consider themselves losers regarless how hard they had worked. These adverse thinking might unable them to move forward in order to strive for their better future. Second of all, the future is also an opportunity for a nation to become thriving. Hence, the government could make provision for its citizen. The country would not be enable to grow in strength if the state does not have a further look into the future and focuses too much on the present.Therefore, as the leaders of a nation, they have to look beyond the present situation to find out efficiency strategy and policy to foster the economic growth as well as citizen’s education level, especially in such a globalised world.
On the other hand, we cannot ignore the present as it is the foundation of the future. It must sound rediculous if people take their well-being in the future as granted despite their laziness and lack of patience to cling on their goals. It is because all achievements we may earn somedays is the result of a hard-working process that we have made during the present time. Hence, it is of great importance for people to concentrate on what the actually need to do as well as manage regarding to their daily tasks. They need to persit with those in order to underpin strongly for their future. Furthermore, the present is is where people are living not the circumstance of future. Some people tend to overrate and venerate about things that unpredictable- future, rather than their realistic situation. By doing so, their time would be wasted and missused. In lieu of that, people should be invested in their present cause it’s the only for us to fulfil our ambitions.
In conclusion, we run for the future but we are living at the moment. There is a tight connection between these terms, because they support for each other. Hence, I believe that people need to pay attention equally for both of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...istic situation. By doing so, their time would be wasted and missused. In lieu of...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2378.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 495.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80404040404 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6630416132 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0681061233 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0833333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207757091142 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600684807146 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597456165535 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130081873488 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459254035359 0.056905535591 81% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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