The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced

The process illustrates the production of orange juice.

There are various stages in the process of making orange juice, beginning with collecting fresh oranges and ending with distributing juice boxes to supermarkets.

Firstly, oranges are picked, loaded onto trucks and delivered to the processing plant where they are thoroughly washed by a machine. Following that, the juice is extracted from the oranges by a squeezing machine. At this stage of production, solid waste, including orange peels and seeds, are collected to feed animals, while the juice can either be packaged ready to be consumed, or transferred to another factory for the evaporation process.

During the evaporation process, the fresh orange juice will be processed by an evaporator machine where the water is removed. The concentrated juice will then be canned and transported to a warehouse before being combined with water again. After that, it will be packaged and distributed to supermarkets, ready to be purchased by consumers.

Votes
Average: 8.2 (4 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46496815287 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91416413933 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.1894847055 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15561717441 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839577054204 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476507475166 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111661725464 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293219266125 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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