In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It is said that individuals have tendency to ignore their health and hit the gym irregularly as well as increase their average weight. this essay will discuss two causes of these problems and give some measures to solve them.
There are some explanations to these trend. Firstly, the recent development of technology sometimes detrimentally impact on people’s health. Video game, for example, attract multifold human’s attention by its imagine layout, as a result, people spend an enormous time sitting in front of computer to play game instead going out. Secondly, people are likely to eat fast food which has considerable number of unhealthy nutrients because of its convenience. Those who have a hectic schedule are unwilling to prepare food at home. Consequently, the average weight of them increases due to fat or sodium ingredients.
I suppose there are two solutions which can solve these problems. Initially, authorities should encourage residents to do exercises. For instance, the government can invest in items having functions that enable people to hit the gym at ease in public areas such as park, hospital and school. Furthermore, we should raise people’">people’s awareness about home-cooking food which has rich ingredients and benefits for well-being. Healthy food advertisements, campaigns, outdoor activities and news can be used in this situation.
An increase in the average weight of people and a decline in the consideration about health and fitness were seen in some nations. From my perspective, these problems have several causes and solutions which help people have better well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i suppose, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57370517928 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4251967109 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657370517928 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2971585063 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256276507041 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875692804072 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07403431532 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180588734012 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885635974956 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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