Many people believe that the main aim for university education is to help graduates to find better job, while some people believe that university education has wider benefit individual and society. discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is said that helping students secure better jobs is the main purpose of university education while the opponents of this idea prefer to support individuals and society as whole. Although universities guide student land better job prospect, there are clearly further benefits.
On the one hand, universities provides the curriculum, academic programs as well as tutorial sessions that are prepared and set by them would be useful for their graduates in the workplace. As a result, the pupils will probably express themselves well in the future. Besides, universities award successful scholars with their professional degrees. These show that students had completed a course of study or part of their education, so that, it is more simple for them to apply for a job with a right kind of qualifications in a recruitment.
On the other hand, I believe that both individuals and society also received an enormous number of benefits by university study. Firstly, education creates a stimulating environment for undergraduates to broaden soft skills which necessary to live in our society. For example, students need to learn how to communicate to expand their circle of friends since schools are accepting students from various local areas and some even from overseas. Secondly, universities can probably help to decrease the crime rate. Thank to study, graduates own knowledge, understandability and sympathetic to avert the social evils and raise people’s awareness.
In conclusion, while university education aids graduates look for better jobs, it seems to me it also has larger advantages to individuals and social life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44705882353 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07160226664 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643137254902 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9004555785 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326752276009 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103365794352 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070441310568 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191628833966 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058230770698 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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