The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The given process diagram illustrates how to drinking water is pumped out and makes it more pure with the use of the solar panel. It can be seen from the diagram that mainly four steps are involved in the process.

overall, It is quite apparent from the diagram that solar energy which is renewable energy can also be used to generate electricity which further pumped out water from underground and makes it potable after filtering it.

The first and foremost thing used is the solar panel, which stores the heat from sunlight and makes electricity from it This electricity runs the water pump which is fixed underground. The water pump pumps out the water from the underground. In the following step, this water is passed to filters which make it pure. After purifying the water, filters passed it to a massive water tank, which is placed on the wooden table.

This water tank has an outlet at the bottom and a tap attached to it from which potable water can be taken out in the moveable containers when needed. ( words count -179 by Hassan Siddiqui)

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Overall
...r steps are involved in the process. overall, It is quite apparent from the diagram ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the moveable containers when needed. words count -179 by Hassan Siddiqui
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Suggestion: Words
... the moveable containers when needed. words count -179 by Hassan Siddiqui
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Line 8, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntainers when needed. words count -179 by Hassan Siddiqui
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72972972973 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31079658602 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524324324324 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4591642434 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2222222222 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187881661029 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977526032489 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060205294023 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129067851349 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583722842505 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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