The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The image describes the working of the water pump powered by the energy obtained from the sun.

Process of extracting water from the underground bore or well starts by collecting solar energy from the sun. The massive heat or energy generated from the sun gets stored using solar panel. It consists of photovoltaic cells which consumes the solar energy and converts it into direct current. The pole withstanding solar panel is dug below the ground level and the panel facing the sun.

The DC power generated from the panel is linked to the bore pump located inside the underground bore or well. Water level in the well is higher than the bore pump. The current attached with the bore pump allows water to pump out and stored it into the water tank through a pipe. This water tank delivers water to the whole village.

Overall, it can be seen that the whole process of working of water pump with the help of solar energy takes mainly three steps, first one is to generate DC power through solar panel then, pumping out the water from the bore or well storing it into the water tank and then supplying the water to the whole village.

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Average: 7.1 (84 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10556416924 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453201970443 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2231443329 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184256145187 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088171636672 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422805178469 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133484220944 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342670768388 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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