The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
The diagram illustrates the life cycle of the honey bee. At first glance, it is evident that it consists of a series changes which called as metamorphosis.
To begin with, life begin as an egg which laid in the leaf. Then the baby bee hatches and eats the nectar from the flower. As the baby bee grows, it sheds its skin two times in which it happens in the next 5 days after it hatched, and the second moulting will be occurred in the following 7 days of the first shed time.
As the time goes by, the baby bee emerges in the next 9 days as a young bee. At first, the wings and its body are quite small, nevertheless, they expand their shape into their full size in the next 4 days. Ultimately, the mature honey bee is ready to fly and it will spend its life feeding its life from the flower’s nectar, producing a number of honey, reproducing their next generation every three days and beginning the life cycle once again.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, second, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34285714286 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33305265562 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577142857143 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7712655724 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271366192913 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149642988863 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199865449821 0.0843802449381 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210765591697 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975052871559 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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