The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The illustration highlights the process by which how a salmon develops from egg to adult fish.
Overall, it is clear that this fish must go through a cyclical progression of 9 stages in three distinct areas to regenerate itself in the sea.
With regards to the first area of its life cycle in the river, mature salmon moves back from the ocean to the river for spawning operations. Next, the eggs go through an incubation process before the emergence of freshwater rearing. It is at this stage that baby salmon moves to the estuary area for continuing rearing.
Looking at the last part of the cycle in the ocean, salmon now grows and is mature after migrating to rearing areas. It is only after the maturation step that this fish goes back to the river in order to complete the cycle of salmon regeneration. Now it begins the spawning process all over again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... adult fish. Overall, it is clear that this fish must go through a cyclical progres...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... is only after the maturation step that this fish goes back to the river in order to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65359477124 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47956318439 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7045345865 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261254672914 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108465452017 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943335959531 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163333790762 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984729604339 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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