The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The picture illustrates the different life stages of salmon.
Overall, it can be observed that there are 8 phases in the life cycle of salmon, beginning with hatching of egg in the incubation period and ending with the spawning of adult fish in the same river.
To begin with, salmon begin their lives in the river and in the form of hatching the egg in the incubation period. The young salmon will emerge to freshwater rearing from eggs. Before swimming to the ocean, young fish will migrate to estuary rearing and it will occur both in river water and ocean and it is called ESTUARY stages. Salmon will migrate to ocean from estuary rearing and it will migrate with other fish in the ocean, from there they will growth and maturity will happen by mingling with other fish. Then the adult fish then travel to the river for the spawning and they will migrate to spawning areas in the rivers. During the spawning, salmon will produce eggs in the same river where salmon was born.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66857142857 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0654277612 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468571428571 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9551772032 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254795350217 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127912715823 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607081210715 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195157967932 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444131082057 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.