The diagram below shows the light penetration under the ocean.
The diagram chart reveals that information about the light penetration deep the ocean.
First of all,it is clearly seen about surface temperature whereas sky has zero ratio in the chart.After that,the temperature is five degrees C as well as sunlight zone have two hundreds metres.Therefore,the light penetration has twilight zone of ten thousands metres as far as temperature must
3 degrees C.
In addition ,semi - dark zone have four thousand metres under the ocean instead of temperature at one degrees C.Moreover,dark zone have very immense rock and land ocean. Lastly,it has six thousands metres on the charts.
To sum up,on one hand surface temperature have zero metres.on other hand,the light penetration dark zone ocean and rock and land have higher meter in the diagram.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, lastly, moreover, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 666.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 124.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37096774194 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06355088092 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620967741935 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.0842298053 43.030603864 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.2 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.8 5.23603664747 378% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207620477204 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136172529228 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116585388896 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166807906807 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107595826265 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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