Television has had a significant influences on the culture of many societies.To what extent would you say that television has positively and negatively affected the cultural development of your society?
It is true that television is entertainment resources through it give us lot of relaxation for mind . The root can that television plays a vital role in human being life . some adolescent ponder that television has impact decreasing the ritual of your citizens.There are manifold reasons for this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the perspective.
The seeds to the issue are multiheads.There most predominant it is no doubt today every dozen using the mass media.For instance, cell phones, computer, laptop, tablets,iPhone,DVD,CD, and television so on.Therefore, they always use it in their life instead of television is very common thing in India but also off spring should television in everyone house /apartment.Moreover, kids always liking all the shows as far as they has plethora time killing in their life.
Nevertheless,there are no denying, in my point of view television is very essential part of life but also people can limit use the television in our life.Furthermore, they must superb effect in their career line as well as they always active in their work and they would essay learn all the things.For example, study,professional, function,sports,industry line and business extra.lastly,time is very imperative in whole life than time never come back in our life.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand there are strong opinion television has umpteen indispensable in whole life.All in all some person trust that television down fall all the cultural development.on other hand I am agree with this because youth has always liking introvert himself if they could not interact somebody.Thus,
pupil would control any thing in their life so we should table time they could follow it .they can achieve anything in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, no doubt, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27112676056 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52840863073 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609154929577 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.113081218 49.4020404114 350% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 249.5 106.682146367 234% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.3333333333 20.7667163134 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 7.06120827912 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123606958687 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729962860341 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0099913135461 0.0667982634062 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735104569975 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340202512423 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.1 13.0946893788 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.