childcare is considered the most important factor for the society these days,so parents should attend parental training to give better care to these children.To what do you agree or disagree?
It is unquestionable true that Some masses ponder that in few days toddler care is very essential part of community.The root can that parents can visit their parental training course through they must much carefully more than pupil.There is strong opinion that 's why I am fully agree this with assertion.There are manifold reasons behind for this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to the see things in the right way.
The seeds to the issue and multiheads.There most predominant children play a vital role in human being life as well as today parents should give hundred proportion care of their kids.After that,dweller have doing plethora activities with their baby.For examples,
parents also participation teenager games like football,tennis, cricket,badminton and study,function and so on.Therefore,there is simple motivation while they can easily care to who children more to them .Otherwise,That's that they always attend their parent meet in the school all in all they should realise which subject their baby week but also easily observed it.
Moving on this drawback,there is no denying that fact the,first and foremost,In my view teenager life is gold period in whole life.In this age is very critical of youngster because school life decide who line to select in the future.Moreover,it only dependent of parents as far as offspring will good teach their children and very well guide.Last but not the least,I think that,sometimes parents could speak aggression to the juveniles than it is very badly impact of kids.please can speak polite with their kids.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand juvenile is very memorable period in our life.On the other hand parents should try to make friend their baby.Then,they always speak their problems.Thus,parents must attend parental training course who can realise their weak and strong point their kid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, i reckon, i think, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3468013468 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2414993209 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619528619529 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.748747489 49.4020404114 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 397.0 106.682146367 372% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.25 20.7667163134 358% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.0 7.06120827912 538% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.01903807615 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169597398795 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107220617212 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459037963633 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105214271154 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354723557825 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.9 13.0946893788 312% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.63 50.2224549098 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.92 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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