These days more fathers stay at home & take care of their children.while mothers go out to work.Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i reckon, no doubt, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03146853147 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06149614089 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611888111888 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5181856999 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 287.8 106.682146367 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.2 20.7667163134 275% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 7.06120827912 411% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17199608235 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878663645881 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322424522956 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865960565977 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265532327642 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.0946893788 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 50.2224549098 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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