In many countries the television telecasts foreign made programs.The dominance of imported intertainment harmful to the cultures of these countries.Do you agree or disagree with this?
A lot of nations the television daily soft serials foreign language shows.The root can that some people ponder that foreign program has dangerous for the younthrough they has losing the rituals and countries. There are strong opinion television plays a vital role in human being life.There are manifold reasons for this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue are multiheads.There most predominant in these days television is very common thing in their home as far as everyone must watch different programs on the televisions.Therefore, today there are plethora channels in the LCD but also kids always like the foreign shows.For instance,Spanish,Asia,
French,Arabic,English and so on.Hence,they can learn this language as well as I thing it would beneficial in the career line instead of juvenile might watch the foreign music,movie,speak extra.Hence,they could easily understand all the languages.
Nevertheless,there are no denying,some adolescent believe that youth can watch the foreign shows than there has no value of cultural.Moreover,they would not follow the religous.For example,
teenager can not introvert in any festivals.So,Holi, Christmas,Birthday,
Occasions and so on.Lastly,pupil should not active in any work.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand it is no doubt television has umpteen part of life and now younger are mostly watch the foreign channels.On other hand, it is true that adolescent can follow the different language shows.Thus,
there would understand any languages.In my point of view children must enjoy their culture and rituals.they should follow it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, no doubt, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6626984127 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.85530322255 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623015873016 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.033228932 49.4020404114 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 285.4 106.682146367 268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.4 20.7667163134 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.0 7.06120827912 425% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0986374397849 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059653989459 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035261496441 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0374141411974 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339636206124 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.4 13.0946893788 232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.44 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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