In many countries are engaged in some kind of paid work.Some people regard this as completely wrong?while others consider it a valuable work experience ,which is important for learning and talking responsibility .what is your opinion?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Then
...erience is very imperative part of life.Then, communication skills,obligation,person...
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...ntries are providing testing for the new candidate.For instance,they always check...
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...with anybody.Otherwise, they could not fears, scared in our life .As far as they hav...
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...s they have well education in their life .they can achieve anything. All said a...
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... are indispensable discuss the life Thus,they can change whole life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44628099174 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59034100435 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657024793388 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.772118354 49.4020404114 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.285714286 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5714285714 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1428571429 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113865550123 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535759548448 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514079449231 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0595812207025 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597223296769 0.056905535591 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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