school children are becoming far too dependent on computer .This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills.Teachers needs to avoid using computer in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills.Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
It is true that these days lots of school student has total dependent on internet.The root can that impacts on other activities like writing, reading ,communication skills .The strong opinion teacher should ignore the electronic gadgets in the classroom and they would teaching basic study related in class work.I am fully agree with this statement .
There are manifold reasons for this.This essay throw some light an all aspects to see in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue are mutliheads. There most predominant nowadays children are full dependent on social website . They have umpteen time spend on Internet. They can using plethora electronic materials.For instance, computer,laptop,tablets
and cell phone extra.kids do not force study .Therefore, Actually they do play many indoor games .They have never involved in any activities like study ,function ,
indoor games so on.
Nevertheless, it is no doubt technology is very essential part of life.Otherwise,technology is very fast as well as it is very common in India. However, adolescents using the technology in their work . Todays all dozen using it.For examples, Business man , engineer , universities ,company and factors so on.Last but not the least,some people ponder that toddlers should focus on the study as far as they would reading ,writing ,
talking one to other person because they can lack of confident upsurge day by day.Then,pupils have good communication skill development and it will be help in future.
All said and done I reckon on one hand my point of view all school should provide basic study allow in the class .Thus,teacher could avoid smart class.on the other hand,teacher should loud read all the student read the book line voice.I think that,juveniles can easily involve in the class .
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actually, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, no doubt, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37722419929 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22226155868 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669039145907 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.689747111 49.4020404114 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.1 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.2 7.06120827912 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 53.0 5.01903807615 1056% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201532167684 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641207342517 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489736058516 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084746782862 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436760874018 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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