some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoo.others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos .Discuss both thede views and give your own opinion?
Most of adolescent ponder that wild animals must not living in zoo than wild animals are very harmful of human being life.The root can that some off spring trust that animals have full right coming in zoo more than zoo plays a vital role in animals life.There are manifold reasons for it.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue are multiheads.There most predominant in these days dozens have hectic schedule in their life.Therefore they can not take care of animals as far as they doing lot of work in every day.Hence
they should not time spent in their family members but also every person busy in our life .For instance study, job,out games, actor, actress,engineer so on.Todays teenager must focus on their career line.However they should very punctual about in work.So youth always think about i do everything then i good in study insects of they can achieve anyone.
Nevertheless,there are no dying in my point of view some older believe that wild animals have full right living in zoo.As well as animals can feel that all the things in whole life.It is no doubt animals is very essential part of their life such as animals have very brave and sharp mind than we must feel easily good and unyielding things way.For example animals have very emotion,faithful diligent and obligation extra.Last but not the least zoo would give every thing about the animals as well as I thing that they can good facilities for the wild animals.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand it is true that every person have hectic module in our life and they can not play the game with the animals.on the other hand there are strong opinion zoo should able any thing we need the animals like care ,love , health food .Thus kid always visit in the zoo they are many time spent in the zoo.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, no doubt, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68404907975 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45228669447 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542944785276 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 20.2975951904 399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.5 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 381.75 106.682146367 358% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.5 20.7667163134 392% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 43.75 7.06120827912 620% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277353208654 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177352672223 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747103893947 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148660856602 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087907929232 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.4 13.0946893788 316% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.28 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.05 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 10.1190380762 340% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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