Many museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit places?
In these days,tourists are basic need in any nations as well as they are visited so many places such as museums and cultural areas but now local person not interesting in their history areas or museums.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right way.
First and foremost,offspring have a hectic schedule in their work place that 's why youth might not awareness about religious sites.After that,one big reason that teenagers are never conciousness by history places nor theater such as they are knowledge about their birth places as far as who think that they are acknowledge their know everywhere to history.Moreover,this is immense matter individual never visit on local areas.
Moving further,there are no denying that fact the,government should change bit on historical places and would local citizen can show their interest in cultural places.However,
government could start rebuild the buildings or I think so it is work for it.In fact,tourist masses almost arrive on historical regions because they have abilities learning new things if who always went one to others religion areas.
All said and done,I reckon authority have right change the local place that city areas human can go their historical sites or museum.Thus,in this solution people can see new changing on the local area and they will definitely come it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, i reckon, i think, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03969604831 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9756061277 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 288.75 106.682146367 271% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.0 20.7667163134 265% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.5 7.06120827912 347% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253292468934 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150907065433 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662937209028 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130873562666 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741874530957 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.8 13.0946893788 235% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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