some people believe that teach children the literature and history of their history of other countries.To what exrant do you agree or disagree?
I think that it must significant to learn teenager the cultural history through some off spring ponder that literature and local history essential all the nations.There are very strong opinion impact of pupil life.There are manifold reasons behind for this.This essay would throw some light an all the aspects to see things in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue are multiheads.There most predominant today juveniles can not interact one to another dozen in their life as well as they always like introvert himself.Hence,kids has plethora time killing on social website than youth have using umpteen application if electronic devices. For instance, cell phone ,computer,tablet,
laptop, youtube,twitter
and so on.Therefore, youngster could consciousness any activities but also they would not like conversation with someone.
Nevertheless,there are no denying,in my point of view and elder trust that law should compulsory for anyone colleges, schools,university all in all teacher must talk about rituals and religious places for student life.For example,gurdwara Sahib,golden temple,
and extra.Lastly,sir can do awareness for literature and custom with kids as far as they can try it.
All said and down,I reckon on one hand it is no doubt in these days technology is very fast.Thus,it is many common things either everybody using in our life.on other hand adolescent can think that every could start the religious study for student life.Then,it is very superb effect of children life instead of we can upsurge knowledge day by day such as they must know about their tradition religions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52016129032 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36915128942 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689516129032 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5517746165 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 273.8 106.682146367 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.6 20.7667163134 239% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.4 7.06120827912 431% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844053451395 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424361979897 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430725585707 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0340954149705 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421801741531 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.4 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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