Many museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people.Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit places?
It is unquestionable true that few threater and religious places only reached the foreign and tourists individuals.The root can that but nowadays local offspring has not interesting historical areas.There are manifold reasons behind for this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue and multiheads.There most predominant todays adolosecents have very busy in their work.Then, that's why they can not awareness about museum and treaters.After that,kids always active on social sites as well as children could not curious about any things.For instances, function,historical city, acting and outdoor games so on.Moreover,
teenagers have always attracting indoor games all in all they plethora time killing on internet.
Moving on this people attract local history areas, there is no dying the fact that, first and foremost law should provide the competition in every years relate to religion region who people would knowledge about the history.
For examples, Taj Mahal,Golden temples and extra.Lastly, laws ask some question to historical and give prize which offspring to up date for historical region and museum.According to me,it is the best solution adults can curious for learn to historical history.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand,older would talk about culture for their children.on the other hand,government should start competition all the nation.Thus,i think that it will be possible everyone attract to historical places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71179039301 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.204633285 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681222707424 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.3263575045 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 261.6 106.682146367 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.8 20.7667163134 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.2 7.06120827912 371% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18728818238 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953020189808 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249464377141 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837744399396 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343521992007 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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