obesity was once considered a disease of adults,however,it is becoming increasingly common among children.Why do you think is happening?what can be done to help children stay healthy?
It is no doubt health play a vital role in human being through nowadays, everyone is very curious about their fitness and healty.The can root that in few days youth should not like a fat but also unfitness body.However,
teenager always think than obesity has disease in their life.Thus are so plethora reasons behind this.This essay throw some light an all aspects to see lights in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue and multiheads.There most predominant today juvenile has always liking the junk food.For instance,burgan,pizza,
oil foods like chine and spicy food and so on.Therefore,this has not good for pupils because sometimes junk food have preparedinstead of it has not hygiene place .Moreover,they have very demerits of adolescents life.There must cause umpteen disease like blood pressure,anxiety,low pressure,depression, stress and overweight extra.
Nevertheless,there are no denying,I think that home-made food is best of everyone .Furthermore, home-made food is health compare to the restaurant food.After that,in my point of view, youngster can need health in whole life .lastly,kids can only eat home food if they must be delighted and healthy in our life.
All said and done,one hand it is true that adults have very careful about their health.Then,they could not like unfitness body.One other hand,children always eat the food health.However,they are so awareness about their healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, no doubt, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59447004608 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68972221047 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663594470046 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3641936831 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 303.5 106.682146367 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.25 20.7667163134 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.75 7.06120827912 492% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844555731562 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530584813165 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259130645758 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0411746742368 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248562917569 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.03 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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