The diagram illustrates how to produce canned fruit step by step. It is clear that there are several main steps in the process, from the picking of the pears to the final canned product.
Overall, it can be seen that the process of canning pears is a complex process involving many steps.
In the first stage of the process, ripe pears are picked by hand and then transported to the factory where the pearls are washed and then checked a quality under a magnified view. Next, the defective pears are taken away and the good ones are cooled in a storage at a specific temperature. Then the pears are weighed and graded into different grades. Following this, the pears are peeled before slicing them and then their cores are removed.
In the next step, these cored and sliced pears are put in cans and sealed before being cooked. This also sterilizes the cans filled with pears. After this, the cans are labeled and stored and are finally dispatch to the supermarkets for sale.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dispatched'.
Suggestion: dispatched
... are labeled and stored and are finally dispatch to the supermarkets for sale.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6936416185 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2225565068 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606936416185 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0058566529 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19833473979 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802869321621 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453200130062 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128437466056 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345388515825 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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