The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram expresses how the process of producing soft cheese happens.

As can be seen, the production of soft cheese involves five main steps, starting with mixing ingredients stage and ending at cooling to obtain the last complete product.

To begin with, the first step is mixing the combination of water and milk. The mixture then is cooled at 5*C in 2 hours before being added salt in order to prepare for the next phase. Afterwards, the liquid, which is the mixture of milk and water, goes through the fermentation process under the pressure of heat at 35*C in 6 hours. Later, the hot gas evaporates through the steam system while the liquid continues to be heated up at 100*C in 8 hours and changed into thick liquid gradually. In the end, by cooling at 5*C in 6 hours, soft cheese is completely produced and obtained through one filter, when waste water from the process is poured through another filter.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, while, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76397515528 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40042625743 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639751552795 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.119210117 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976604701797 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523332303952 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626235719997 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101297049694 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609236351425 0.0819641961636 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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