The diagram below shows stages and equipment used in cement-making process and how cement is used to produce for concrete production.
The process diagrams illustrate various stages in manufacturing cement and concrete production.
Cement and concrete productions are both man-made linear processes. Cement production involves five stages such as crushing, mixing, heating, grinding and packing while in concrete production only a straight simple process of mixing is done.
Manufacturing cement begins with the crushing of limestone and clay in a crusher equipment in order to produce a powder-like substance. After that, it will be feed to the mixer which is connected to the rotating heater. Then, it will undergo a heating process before proceeding in the grinder machine. The result will be a powdered substance called cement. The last stage will be packing of finished products in the bags for distribution.
Concrete, which is used for building construction, has a standard process that follows certain material proportions. Gravel is the main raw materials at 50%, while sand and cement composed of 25% and 15% respectively. Finally, water is added to complete the mixture. All of these materials will be continuously rotate and mix in the concrete mixer until the required mixture is achieve.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'then', 'while', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276699029126 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.160194174757 0.116061578633 138% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0970873786408 0.0759168565197 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0291262135922 0.0366838410393 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00970873786408 0.0131127313244 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106796116505 0.155750635184 69% => OK
Participles: 0.0679611650485 0.0379272487307 179% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9515468877 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0194174757282 0.0210936926555 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.106796116505 0.0948980150116 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0242718446602 0.00437022459523 555% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0145631067961 0.00967000014798 151% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1194.0 1161.00487805 103% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.9 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.56043956044 5.90752243213 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.456043956044 0.337110787985 135% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.368131868132 0.247514529752 149% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.269230769231 0.171178102325 157% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131868131868 0.112407865282 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9515468877 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631868131868 0.546246751206 116% => OK
Word variations: 61.5572569855 49.3433353143 125% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1666666667 23.0094962315 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1941962262 42.9750493124 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 135.714022679 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 23.0094962315 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.416666666667 0.689975730869 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 51.9798534799 47.7609492067 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.26829268293 2.94281807926 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469497684199 0.418131533498 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106195717049 0.181151798455 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.045435307657 0.0850326197045 53% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.589231813177 0.706616315825 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165820012015 0.157042692854 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182225991204 0.228904883108 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820763774556 0.108899403657 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.26540819599 0.367819155151 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105393496711 0.0812612215331 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319422324142 0.316326947829 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458771689681 0.0921553760075 50% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.08536585366 196% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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