Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together, while others think that people and communities become more isolated.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is undoubtedly true that the used of the internet is prevalent in today’s generation. While some people believe that the usage of the net makes the people’s relationships closer, others argue that it isolate the people and communities. It is agreed that the web makes it possible for the people to have closer relationship. This essay will evaluates both arguments before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
On the one hand, for those who believe that the internet created a distant involvement of residents in the communities may think that the internet users have become over dependent on the computers. This may happen when they spent enormous amount of time in the front of the computer playing online games or surfing the net. For instance, in the recent survey of the Central University of Queensland, most respondents who are usually students in their younger years, opted to stay at their home using the computer rather than to actively participate in a community activities.
On the other hand, I support the argument that the net made people’s communication more effective which lead to a closer family ties. This is because the internet, which is the information superhighway, opens the communication gateway. The existence of various cyberspace platforms such as the facebook, the skype, and the twitter enable the people to keep tract of their lost relatives or friends and send instant messages or emails. For example, Boston University conducted a research on the effectivity of the internet on the user’s relationships and found that 80% of them expressed that the communication definitely improved. This is clearly evident that the internet has positively affect the relationship of an individual user.
In conclusion, although the uncontrolled access of the web might hamper the involvement of people in their surroundings, I believe that the overall usage of the net made it possible for every member of the society to have a closer interaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: evaluate
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Suggestion: activity
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...vident that the internet has positively affect the relationship of an individual user....
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Discourse Markers used:
['may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25138121547 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.135359116022 0.155533422707 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0801104972376 0.0946595960268 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.024861878453 0.0501214627716 50% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0359116022099 0.0437548338989 82% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14364640884 0.122226691241 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0276243093923 0.0403226058552 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06026444971 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0165745856354 0.0326793684256 51% => OK
Particles: 0.00276243093923 0.00163938923432 169% => OK
Determiners: 0.157458563536 0.0861772015684 183% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0110497237569 0.021408717616 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138121546961 0.011925033212 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1993.0 1933.35771543 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24764890282 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382445141066 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294670846395 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.222570532915 0.203846283523 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.163009404389 0.137316102897 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06026444971 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 57.6695282162 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5384615385 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0842073883 49.517814964 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.307692308 127.492653851 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.814263465372 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 54.005546178 49.1944974215 110% => OK
Elegance: 2.15492957746 1.69124875643 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277865619183 0.332605444948 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157362917728 0.102741220458 153% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.091872140614 0.0668466124924 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.677810016217 0.534860350844 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159464927605 0.148594505496 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143670896569 0.134430193775 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100824428058 0.0742795772207 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.507159856487 0.324371583561 156% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0672284554274 0.0638462369009 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205168161478 0.228012699653 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803810416891 0.058150111329 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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