It is more important for a building to serve its purpose having strong foundation. Architects need not to worry if the building is beautiful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that most of the buildings were constructed with a purpose of a powerful foundation and architects made these possible. It is agreed that the building should be constructed not only for a specific purpose but also as a work of art. This essay will discuss that architectural design and structural foundation are both a crucial factors in construction.
To begin with, one of the important aspect to consider in doing a construction project is the building design. It provides layout for the expected plans of its appearance. It also reflects the modern design prevailing at the time of construction. For example, some of the houses, monuments, and churches built at the time of Spanish regime replicate the design of an architectural building in Spain during that time. This clearly indicates that even in the earlier time, the architects greatly considered the aesthetic beauty of the building and that they consider their work as an art.
Furthermore, a building should also be constructed to meet its purpose. It is equally important that it should have a sturdy foundation to make it stand for years. In Ortigas, for instance, some parts of the city center have been susceptible for an earthquake as it lies on the fault line so the building along this line should be built to be an earthquake proof. It is evident that all precautionary measures in building construction should be made to avoid future accidents to happen.
In conclusion, this essay acknowledges that architects should consider both the design and foundation of a building. It is recommended that all architects should have a common knowledge about it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'factor'?
Suggestion: factor
...tructural foundation are both a crucial factors in construction. To begin with, one ...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... the time of construction. For example, some of the houses, monuments, and churches built a...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould have a common knowledge about it.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'it is true', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233898305085 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.152542372881 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0745762711864 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0305084745763 0.0501214627716 61% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0508474576271 0.0437548338989 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15593220339 0.122226691241 128% => OK
Participles: 0.0406779661017 0.0403226058552 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99447795922 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0237288135593 0.0326793684256 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.149152542373 0.0861772015684 173% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0271186440678 0.021408717616 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1649.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 316.048096192 86% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0625 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367647058824 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279411764706 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224264705882 0.203846283523 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150735294118 0.137316102897 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99447795922 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.037074148 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.56093040696 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.2109903739 60.7387585426 76% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4285714286 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0813515736 49.517814964 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 47.3697478992 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.84057971014 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301026990099 0.332605444948 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141293583933 0.102741220458 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0954594238947 0.0668466124924 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.606217599785 0.534860350844 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11038113153 0.148594505496 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148461489962 0.134430193775 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738733267514 0.0742795772207 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35187631678 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0344910515049 0.0638462369009 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213347201889 0.228012699653 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642912624749 0.058150111329 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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