In some countries, people want to have their child at later age. What is the causes?
What are the advantages and disadvantages?
In most countries, people decided to have their own family much later than others. While this has been viewed as positive, there is also a negative consequence that needs to be considered. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks and also evaluate the main cause of this trend.
The prime reason of a decision to have a child later in an adult life is career growth. Since the majority of the people now invested a huge amount of money in tertiary education, they need to have an employment that enable them to pay off their debts. This will lead them to be more focus in their career and professional advancement rather than thinking of settling their own family. It is a common knowledge, for example, that professionals married and have children at their late thirties, unlike those who have not finish university that get married at earlier age.
The main advantages of raising child at later age are financial stability and maturity of both parents. Children that were born by older parents experienced greater convenience in life. Parents have the capacity to provide them all the needed care and financial support. Furthermore, they also capable of providing a good nurturing environment because they are matured enough to handle their parenting responsibility. For instance, a child grow with matured parents can be sure of a secure and better future.
The principal disadvantage of having child at matured stage of life is aged gap between the child and the parents. This will be an issue later in future if the age gap is more than thirty years. Being in a different generation, there will be a possibility of misunderstanding or misconception.
In conclusion, the decision of when the child will be born in a family is a personal choice. The advantage and disadvantage should be weigh to come up with an informed decision.
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...future. The principal disadvantage of having child at matured stage of life is...
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...he advantage and disadvantage should be weigh to come up with an informed decision. ...
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... to come up with an informed decision.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238938053097 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.156342182891 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106194690265 0.0946595960268 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0324483775811 0.0501214627716 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0383480825959 0.0437548338989 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12389380531 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.047197640118 0.0403226058552 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82883387948 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0265486725664 0.0326793684256 81% => OK
Particles: 0.00589970501475 0.00163938923432 360% => OK
Determiners: 0.11209439528 0.0861772015684 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0206489675516 0.021408717616 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176991150442 0.011925033212 148% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1859.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 316.048096192 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95833333333 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336538461538 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253205128205 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182692307692 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11858974359 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82883387948 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 58.209015387 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3529411765 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1136256506 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.352941176 127.492653851 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.470588235294 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 43.673453997 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.80519480519 1.69124875643 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395692636428 0.332605444948 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104523690132 0.102741220458 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0587884270576 0.0668466124924 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517525602132 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.108205178729 0.148594505496 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150227070553 0.134430193775 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793698276923 0.0742795772207 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.339214260654 0.324371583561 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0334737582733 0.0638462369009 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255533920973 0.228012699653 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301633041012 0.058150111329 52% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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