The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagram illustrates the steps and minor details on how equipment usage of the cement-modifying process and how cement is consumes the proportion for the construction process. Overall, the first diagram shows how cement being processed into a hunk of concrete for industrial purposes.
Firstly, limestone and clay mixed and crushed into a crusher and develop in a powder form. The powder then goes to a pipe of a mixer which has a rotating heater, where the heat is given on the other side of a pipe. After these process, the powder falls onto a grinder and form a cement that packs in minor bags.
On the second diagram, cement 15%, water 10%, sand 25% and finally gravel 50% were poured into a concrete mixing container to mix all four ingredients together to combine materials together.
- The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions measured in millions of tonnes from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007 68
- Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nurturing than aggressive To what extent do you agree with this 72
- The table below shows the information and prediction regarding the change in the percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries 51
- Do you agree that modern technology has given us more leisure time than before? 56
- Many people nowadays travel aboard for their university education Why do people do this and will you consider doing this yourself 58
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 663.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65740421188 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654411764706 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1340289546 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30824460123 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150152358141 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147471868298 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196460145875 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174748325653 0.0819641961636 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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