"The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world".
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of water consumption in San Diego, California and global. The units are measured in percentage.
Overall, San Diego and California consume water supply in a residential area, since, in a global world people intend to use more water in agriculture, rather than, in industrial and residential areas. In an industrial zone, individuals consume limited water in San Diego and California, however, worldwide usage of water is higher.
San Diego consumes an extremely increased range of water with 60% as compared to California and around the world with 39% and 8%. In addition, San Diego and the global consumption of water remained constant up to 23%, however, California has more growth in consuming water 33%. Some countries around the world would conventionally use water more in agriculture with 69%, hence, the other two countries use slightly lower with 28% and 17% respectively.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31972789116 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94698400101 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557823129252 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8579782719 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312989196826 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165060228282 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10040001869 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237362964296 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266221160593 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.