Many people nowadays travel aboard for their university education. Why do people do this and will you consider doing this yourself?
Many individuals these days travel to foreign countries for education purposes. People do this because they need a good education degree for future needs, as well as, for living in that particular country.
In my opinion, I believe it is absolutely fine studying aboard rather than, in my country. Currently, many adolescents prefer studying aboard because they get to meet different people, build up their confidence, and to exchange different culture, however, English is a very common language in the globe and many are wishing to make their English acceptable enough to have a good conversation with other people. For instance, today, Arab students are hoping to learn English and are willing to be perfect like other children, due to that reason, many people prefer to visit foreign countries to know more about other cultures and languages and to visit historical places as well. The other beneficial reason is that many people travel aboard to have a suitable part time jobs that are good enough to cover up their school fees or other expenses.
To sum up, I would consider studying aboard because it will shape up my life in many ways. It's a great way to build my confidences and capable of handling any situation and have a vast verity of subjects and universities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...y common language in the globe and many are wishing to make their English acceptable enough...
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Line 3, column 761, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...people travel aboard to have a suitable part time jobs that are good enough to cover up t...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... it will shape up my life in many ways. Its a great way to build my confidences and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96744186047 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59843943681 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590697674419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0759253635 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23305742299 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946386588476 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068834935271 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152209409231 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752552003155 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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