The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how comment is used to produce concrete for building purposes

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The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how comment is used to produce concrete for building purposes

The diagram represents the steps and equipment required for cement production and concrete preparation for construction. Overall, cement is the final product produced from two key raw materials which is further used for the construction of buildings by creating the proper mixture of different resources to build strong infrastructure.
Initially, raw ingredients such as limestone and clay were ground to produce powder in the crusher. Then, powdered mixed is thoroughly agitated in mixer. Mixed materials then passes through rotating heater where high temperature is maintained. The heated mixture again moves towards the grinder to create the final product i.e. cement. Finally, cement is packed in the bags for storage and selling purposes.
For the cement to use in building construction, a complex mixture has to be prepared. Mixture consists of 15% cement, 25% sand and 50% gravel with small stones. Consequently, 10% water is added to above prepared mixture which is then mixed in rotating concrete mixer to produce the resources required for building construction.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, if, so, then, as to, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53333333333 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91417485057 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6241353807 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252382339083 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099222518065 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894181275292 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185802306912 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923525554119 0.0819641961636 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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