Essay topics:
The diagram show the life cycle of a honey bee
The diagram illustrates different stages in the life of a honey bee.
Overall, there are five main stages in the life development of the honey bee, from egg to become mature adult insect.
In the first stage, female bee lays typically one or two eggs in the period every three days.Over the following 9 or ten days, each egg hatches and young bees begin their life. After 7 days, their size and shape are bigger than their size former. And they continuously develop until last 9 days for growing three times.
In the next stage, young adult bees were emerged. After 4 days, bee reaches full maturity. Its life cycle takes place for 34-36 days and it starts again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Over
...two eggs in the period every three days.Over the following 9 or ten days, each egg h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 548.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 119.0 196.424390244 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60504201681 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30283395202 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11714679965 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689075630252 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 168.3 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4998117466 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300659810743 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137328893707 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134537564682 0.0843802449381 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234111997486 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133258199331 0.0819641961636 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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