The diagram shows the how electricity is generated by a hydroelectruc dam?

Essay topics:

The diagram shows the how electricity is generated by a hydroelectruc dam?

The diagram illustrates the basic principles of hydroelectric power.

First of all, water trapped into the reservoir behind the dam is forced through intake. It then flows into a narrow chamber called penstock. Where the resulting high pressure turns a turbine. The turbines connected to generator in the powerhouse above, and this is where the movement of turbine is converted into electricity. The resulting electricity leaves the powerhouse via cables that carry it over long distances to where it can be used.

It is interesting to note that a hydroelectric dam creates no harmful byproducts and relies entirely on natural forces to produce electricity. After the turbine stage water flows out through a second channel and into a river. This process is renewable.

Overall, the process requires the large dam connected to a powerhouse. The dam creates a reservoir and the powerhouse where the electricity is generated.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... into a narrow chamber called penstock. Where the resulting high pressure turns a tur...
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...t a hydroelectric dam creates no harmful byproducts and relies entirely on natura...
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.... This process is renewable. Overall, the process requires the large dam conne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, then, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34013605442 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97629737417 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3003264809 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3636363636 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3636363636 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142326158526 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503663450468 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487664475151 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092516707636 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473887790366 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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