the diagram shows how fruit is canned
The diagram shows the process of canning fruits. There are 14 main steps in the process of canning fruits, from picking fruits to delivering by the lorry.The first step in the process is fruits are picked by people hands in order to find out fresh fruits. Subsequently, they are transported to the factory. Next, these fruits will be washed with water until they are clean. Next, the employee will check the fruits for ensure the quality of them. After that, fruits are stayed into the low temperature, this move called cold storing. The next step is that the employee will weight the fruit and the can with the aim to have an equal weight between them. Then, fruits are moved into the can. The following step is the can with fruits are simmered on fire. And after this step, the can will be labeled with a name of company produce. Next, The can of fruits will be reserved and ready to delivered. The final step is all of cans will be packaged to customers or branch of the market
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...cking fruits to delivering by the lorry.The first step in the process is fruits are...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48044692737 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14903065617 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536312849162 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9304185087 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8333333333 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 5.23603664747 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289451459534 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124070578773 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780199024289 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289451459534 0.15604864568 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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