the diagram shows how an office building looks at the present and the plan for its future development
A glance at the maps given reveals the changes that an office building will undergo as planned.
As can be seen from the layouts, there will be a significant extension of the building, providing people with more space to gather.
The most noticeable change will be the disappearance of two grasslands on two sides of the actual work area. The left-side and right-side grassland will be replaced by an outdoor activity area and a meeting area facing a coffee machine respectively.
Regarding the main area for functioning, the entrance now is located on the right side in the south of the building, and getting through it is the reception area and the washroom. However, according to the development plan, people will reach the reception area and then get into the building through the gate located between two single rooms on both sides and there will be no washroom anymore. In the north of the present-day office building, there is a kitchen and a canteen which will be cleared to make way for two office rooms in the future. The stock room next to the canteen at present will be the only room to remain the same as planned.
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- The plans below show the changes of the particular area from 1965 to the present day and the plans also give a description of the proposed changes in future 73
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- Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea some think they should be banned Do you agree or disagree 78
- the diagram shows how an office building looks at the present and the plan for its future development 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 647, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nly room to remain the same as planned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71717171717 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60468995355 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540404040404 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7459675321 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130931895083 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677022883354 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620452071007 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855262021299 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778717085739 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.