The diagram shows the the life cycle of flowering plants Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features Write at least 150 words

Essay topics:

The diagram shows the the life cycle of flowering plants

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Write at least 150 words.

The diagram provides information about the cycle of events occurred in the life of a flower.
Overall, it is a multistepped cyclic process and have 6 different events , the both starting and ending with seed.
Initially, the seeds in the soil imbibe water either coming from rains or from any other water sources. After that, along with water, the sunlight provides the congenial environment for the roots to grow and this process is called germination. Following that, stem starts to generate in opposite direction to the roots and become an independant plant.
Then, the process of pollination stars where insects carry pollens from different plants and exchange with each other .Subsequently, it initates the fertilization, as seeds and fruits develop .A fter this, the seeds get separated from their parent by wind and get dispersed on ground. Finally, the seeds on the soil get ready to regrow and then this cycle repeats again.

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Average: 7.5 (41 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ation about the cycle of events occurred in the life of a flower. Overall, it is...
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...a flower. Overall, it is a multistepped cyclic process and have 6 different even...
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...clic process and have 6 different events , the both starting and ending with seed....
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...genial environment for the roots to grow and this process is called germination....
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...oots to grow and this process is called germination. Following that, stem starts...
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...llowing that, stem starts to generate in opposite direction to the roots and bec...
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...rate in opposite direction to the roots and become an independant plant. Then,...
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...rent plants and exchange with each other .Subsequently, it initates the fertilizat...
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...nt plants and exchange with each other .Subsequently, it initates the fertilization, as seed...
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...rtilization, as seeds and fruits develop .A fter this, the seeds get separated fro...
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...ilization, as seeds and fruits develop .A fter this, the seeds get separated from...
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...he seeds get separated from their parent by wind and get dispersed on ground. Fin...
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...get ready to regrow and then this cycle repeats again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13071895425 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66126839472 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653594771242 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2228263826 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0794569208762 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507260480933 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867902035375 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773132748727 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105994548897 0.0819641961636 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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