Some people think increasing business and cultural contact between countries bring many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.
Some people consider that enhancement inthe business as well as cultural engagement between nations is beneficial for each other. While others have opposite views and claim that it deteriorates the country’s identity. However, I believe developing business overseas provide numerous benefits not only to the person but also to the country.
To embark on, there are few disadvantages of developing business in other country . First, people lose interest towards their culture. They feel others culture more fascinated and adapt their values and transform themselves according to that. For instance, most of Indians wear jeans and tops rather than ethnic wears because they feel their personality enhance with this and they look fashionable. That is why individuals are forgetting their values and tradition and not showing interest in their history.
Conversely, there are plenty of advantages of spreading business overseas. On the one hand, it boosts the economy of the country. Abundant of online platform provides opportunities to businessman to extend their services and developing their enterprises. For example, amazon, the online application provides platform to the people to sell their things to other country’s citizens . Even most of the people get influenced by other culture and try to follow, consequently individual learn insipensable ideas ,facts and gather knowledge about other culture.
To conclude, exchanging culture with business leads to many positive effects llike progression in national economy and maintain relationship with people of other nations and adapting their good ideas and values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, first, however, look, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71487603306 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8475880542 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5782196113 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20447869932 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071877906227 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699676948719 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145007484988 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634226069661 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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