The diagram shows the life cycle of the silk worm and stages in the production of silk cloth
The first diagrammatic representation depicts the information about the stages, which involve the life cycle of a silkworm, and the second flow diagram shows the process; how the silk cloth is produce from cocoon.It is a clear and coherent representation.
As is observed from the given illustration, there are four distinct stages in the life cycle of the silkworm; from eggs to a matured moth, and the process of silk cloth production involves six main steps; from selection of cocoon to silk material.
It can be clearly seen that, moth lays its eggs, at the first stage in the life cycle of silkworm. After ten days, silkworm larvae hatch from the eggs; these larvae feed on mulberry leaf. Then, four to six weeks later, silk thread is came on the larvae of silkworm.Subsequently, it takes three to eight days to produce cocoon. Finally, it became an adult moth after 16 days.
Secondly, in the process of silk production, first step involved the selection of cocoon, and then boiled into water.After boiling, 300-900 m long thread; made of cocoon has been unwounded, and then twisted with each other.After twisting, the thread can either be dyed after woven, or directly dyed after twisting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8523217235 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.0742216746 43.030603864 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.571428571 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263465601081 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11602476473 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112825624515 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177214862323 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107077188364 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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