The given diagrams illustrate lifecycle of silkworm and different stages in production of silk cloth. lifecycle of silkworm completes in four stages whereas production of silkworm finishes in five steps.
Firstly, the adult silkworm lays eggs which hatches into larvae after about 10 days. Silkworm larvae feed on mulberry leaves and within 4-6 weeks larva is covered by silk thread. After 3-6 days, cocoon are formed which converts into moth in 16 days and the cycle is repeated.
First of all, cocoon is selected which is boiled in water. Further, after boiling, the silk thread is unwound and about 300-900 m thread is extracted from it. After that, thread is twisted and either it is dyed or woven. Finally, when the thread is woven it is dyed and silk cloth is ready.
Least time is taken to convert larva into cocoon but it takes about 4-6 weeks for larva to cover itself with silk thread. The process of manufacturing silkworm has more steps than the stages of lifecycle of silkworm. Cocoon stage of silkworm is taken for manufacturing silk cloth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lifecycle
...ent stages in production of silk cloth. lifecycle of silkworm completes in four stages wh...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Least'.
Suggestion: The Least
...ven it is dyed and silk cloth is ready. Least time is taken to convert larva into coc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, whereas, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87777777778 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3542449184 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.8915030871 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.1666666667 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238691590802 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105540560187 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113719636573 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155327043944 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757989399016 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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