The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the Silk cloth.
The given diagram reveals the information about the process of life cycle of the silkworm, and the production of silk cloth. It is clear and coherent representation.
It is crystal clear from the diagram, there are main four stages of life cycle of the silkworm, from eggs to moth. After 10 days it is made with silkworm, and next 4 to 6 week under the processing of Mulberry leaf (food). While it is going to Silk thread to larva, and after 3 to 8 days it has been cocoon that is last step of moth.
As far as trend, production of silk cloth has five step. First and main step is silk after then boiling the silk in water, and the second step is unwind thread (300-900). Moreover, third step is twist in this step dye the thread, furthermore, last and final step is weave that step same work like twist.
Overall, it it is all steps of life cycle of silkworm, and production of silk cloth. All step is very simple and easy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
... is made with silkworm, and next 4 to 6 week under the processing of Mulberry leaf f...
^^^^
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'step' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'steps'.
Suggestion: steps
...rend, production of silk cloth has five step. First and main step is silk after then...
^^^^
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'unwound'.
Suggestion: unwound
...e silk in water, and the second step is unwind thread 300-900. Moreover, third step is...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...at step same work like twist. Overall, it it is all steps of life cycle of silkworm,...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32183908046 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30037305906 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8638450268 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356850432811 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171796806525 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192115809184 0.0843802449381 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269876809676 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126608855221 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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