The diagram shows life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of silk cloth
The provided two diagrammatical representations reveal: silkworm's life cycle, and manufacturing of silk cloth.
As it is presented in diagram, that the life cycle of silkworm has four stages i.e from eggs to moth. however, production of silk cloth require five levels, selection of cocoon to weave the clothes.
Having a glance at life stages of silkworm, it is shown that initially that female worm lay eggs. which after ten days grows as larvae, and that larvae consume mulberry leaves as its food source. after, passing a month larva began to form silk thread then, becomes take 3 to 8 days to be cocoon which after sixteen days grow as a complete moth.
for producing silk cloth, it is lucid that firstly cocoon selection is done. however after that, cocoon is boiled in water which then, is followed by unwinding thread into 300 to 900 metres. when twisting is done, either the thread can be weaved or dyed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... has four stages i.e from eggs to moth. however, production of silk cloth require five ...
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...ilkworm, it is shown that initially that female worm lay eggs. which after ten da...
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... sixteen days grow as a complete moth. for producing silk cloth, it is lucid that ...
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...ing silk cloth, it is lucid that firstly cocoon selection is done. however after ...
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...nwinding thread into 300 to 900 metres. when twisting is done, either the thread can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79746835443 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5118211149 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670886075949 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.360679775 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2222222222 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305384909848 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125217018299 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121293919443 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2114503676 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149253097117 0.0819641961636 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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