The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates

Essay topics:

The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates.

The diagram depicts that which procedure needs for high school graduate to take admission in university.

According to the diagram that, school to duet need to fill the form which can download from the university’s website. Secondly, they had to compile the other needed document and it should be sent to admin department of the University. If an application rejected by the admin or cancel the application, candidate have to complete, application for alternative course then again send that to the admin.

Further more, that would be up rocks two weeks taken by the administration for provisional expect tonnes. For this procedure and we need more documents and compile it by candidate. After all this process of around four weeks, then admin except the complete enrolment. Moreover, this procedure begin for candidates to select the subject of their choice. Next, final registration with the university’s Dean then finally school graduate get admission to the university.

Crude, the procedure is easy and take around one month for free school graduates for their further studies in University.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...final registration with the university’s Dean then finally school graduate get ad...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, second, secondly, then, after all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34285714286 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89120270151 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611428571429 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0559763884 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.5 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375912452587 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150172322889 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127588501585 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275303688999 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113088790888 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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