Now a days, in this modern era, teenagers are not afraid to commit any crime and followed the wrong path. This situation is very critical for parents and any nation. However, in many in my Perception, I agree with this statement to a larger extent. This essay will defined my views and give the appropriate conclusion.
To begin with, firstly, prisoners are best example for teenagers for life learning lesson. prisoners had to undergo from the prison and bad punishment of the prison. After their retribution they may become a good citizen of nation. They left their bed box and live simple life with hard work and earn money. From this whole situation they become a better person and they can give their life own example to youngsters. Prisoners can explain and teach juveniles for their better future. They also encourage youngsters to study, starting career etc. Prisoners can be a good guide for teenagers who have experience of life’s bad phase and also about that how they come out from that critical situation.As an Academy, in Delhi, India, some group of ex-prisoners are running the NGO for those students or teenagers who have involve in crime like violence, ragging, drug smuggling, theft etc.
Further more, also acknowledge youngsters about society behaviour towards any prisoners or old criminal. Society do not respect and accept any criminal. Moreover because of his naughty teenager aware about their future life and they understand that for any old criminal is hard to get any job or work, which may spoil their future or life.
On the other hand, some prisoners are not changed after their punishment. So because of that criminal mind and thoughts they sometimes misleading to juveniles. But some prisoners do very good work for better society and better future of nation. Prisoners lead youngsters to right direction.
In closing, I pen down saying that, prisoners can be best example for you and ask for their life.
- The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates 78
- The charts below show information on crime in the UK for 2002 66
- Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems What are the causes of this and what are some solutions 73
- Some people believe that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams always succeed in sports Others think that success in sports depends on mental attitudes Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00615384615 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50377986442 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.2568375751 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.35 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175290205207 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544653978672 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045723020341 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931382035374 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364436174306 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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