The diagram shows the process of making soft cheese

Essay topics:

The diagram shows the process of making soft cheese.

The diagram gives information about how soft cheese production is made.
In general, it can be seen that the process of producing soft cheese involves five steps starting with water and milk, and finishing with the end product. Cheese production is a heat-based and time-consuming process to thicken the output product.
To begin with, milk and water are mixed together, and then this mixture is put in cooling equipment at five degrees Celsius for two hours. After that, salt is added to the mixture before it is brought to the fermentation stage. This process requires turning the heat to thirty-five degrees Celsius for six hours. It takes eight hours to evaporate with more heat which reaches one hundred degrees Celsius. The liquid becomes thicker and bigger size. Putting the wastewater in before this mixture is cooled again at a lower temperature. In the final stage, soft cheese is sorted out through a special filter.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, in general, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06493506494 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54310121801 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62987012987 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6143757082 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19640915049 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781911208156 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900239123767 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174283434948 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812866442191 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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